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Sunday, 24 February 2013
Welcome Back! 25th Feb
Welcome old and new friends!
We have moved our blog, and whilst we work on getting some of the old comments on here, I thought we could start with a new 100 word challenge...
…the car stopped suddenly… Can you write a 100 words around this?
Aicha, yr 5 turquoise: The car suddenly stopped because William and Rubecca found something glistening in the distance but guarded by a wild, ferocious, angry beast called Coco Kemper. In an instant Coco looked angrily at William and Rubecca they both froze as the spine chilling beast kept on creeping closer and closer, what shall we do William whispered Rubecca just make a run for it william exclaimed in a louder whisper as they headed back to the car at top speed with the beast at ther heels .They soon found out that they had no petrol so they headed down a near path…
The car suddenly stopped because the car was out of petrol and Bugler Betty jumped out of it. She had a bag full of gold she stole the gold at a rich person big house and stole his limo and with the gold. She will buy a Ferrari and get a bigger house. She will buy an ak47 and shoot random people. As she buys all the stuff she shoots the man and stole more weapon’s like a shotguns and samurai sword and other deadly weapons so she went to the city and shot the president so loads of police sounded the alarm….
One day a car suddenly stopped because there was an old woman crossing the road and almost got hit. There was a man in the car and was not paying no attention to the road. And I was the one who saved her. She gave me £1000, 000 in cash, I gave her a huge hug and ran off with the money but then a man was jogging in front of me and took all my money and I only had £15 in my hand. MY WON’T BE IMPRESSED IN THIS. But at least I tried. She was angry.
The car suddenly stopped because it got stopped because harry potters evil big brother was mad at him for leaving him out of his movies and summoned a zombie ninja army with guns and the power to move things with the power to mind. Suddenly, Harry potter shows up with jack sparrow and the kill the bad guys and win.
The car suddenly’ stopped. Towards the car there were people coming and holding their hands in the air .when the person came out the car he realized that they were zombies .He quickly got a stick and started smashing there heads of .The man quickly ran in the house and sore some people scared to death there was one boy what wasn’t scared he knows how to get the zombies back to normal people .So he took to glasses of liquid and threw the liquid on the zombies and nothing happen .The boy said there is something wrong so the boy checked his paper and he said I know what’s wrong I was supposed to pout the red one in the blue one .So he put it in and threw it on the zombies and the zombies turned into real people.
Aicha, yr 5 turquoise:
ReplyDeleteThe car suddenly stopped because William and Rubecca found something glistening in the distance but guarded by a wild, ferocious, angry beast called Coco Kemper. In an instant Coco looked angrily at William and Rubecca they both froze as the spine chilling beast kept on creeping closer and closer, what shall we do William whispered Rubecca just make a run for it william exclaimed in a louder whisper as they headed back to the car at top speed with the beast at ther heels .They soon found out that they had no petrol so they headed down a near path…
The car suddenly stopped because the car was out of petrol and Bugler Betty jumped out of it.
ReplyDeleteShe had a bag full of gold she stole the gold at a rich person big house and stole his limo and with the gold. She will buy a Ferrari and get a bigger house. She will buy an ak47 and shoot random people. As she buys all the stuff she shoots the man and stole more weapon’s like a shotguns and samurai sword and other deadly weapons so she went to the city and shot the president so loads of police sounded the alarm….
One day a car suddenly stopped because there was an old woman crossing the road and almost got hit. There was a man in the car and was not paying no attention to the road. And I was the one who saved her. She gave me £1000, 000 in cash, I gave her a huge hug and ran off with the money but then a man was jogging in front of me and took all my money and I only had £15 in my hand. MY WON’T BE IMPRESSED IN THIS. But at least I tried. She was angry.
ReplyDeleteThe car suddenly stopped because it got stopped because harry potters evil big brother was mad at him for leaving him out of his movies and summoned a zombie ninja army with guns and the power to move things with the power to mind. Suddenly, Harry potter shows up with jack sparrow and the kill the bad guys and win.
ReplyDeleteThe car suddenly’ stopped. Towards the car there were people coming and holding their hands in the air .when the person came out the car he realized that they were zombies .He quickly got a stick and started smashing there heads of .The man quickly ran in the house and sore some people scared to death there was one boy what wasn’t scared he knows how to get the zombies back to normal people .So he took to glasses of liquid and threw the liquid on the zombies and nothing happen .The boy said there is something wrong so the boy checked his paper and he said I know what’s wrong I was supposed to pout the red one in the blue one .So he put it in and threw it on the zombies and the zombies turned into real people.
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